Precis #2
Shannon Travis, eminent writer for
CNN.com, in her article entitled “Is Obama taking the black vote for granted?,”
declares that Obama can afford to take the black vote for granted. In fact, in
opposition to those who think Obama can’t take the vote for granted, she states
“that’s not entirely true”. Because Obama got ninety-five percent of the black
vote in the two thousand eight elections, he can actually afford to take the
black vote for granted.
Travis utilizes three rhetorical devices
to bolster her point. She employs logos when she describes why Obama can take
the black vote for granted; “Obama won 95% of the black vote in 2008, and polls
show he enjoys 87% support among black registered voters versus 5% for
Republican rival Mitt Romney”(ibid.). Also she utilizes pathos as she describes
Obama’s response to conservatives who stated “[u]nlike President Obama,[Romney]
will not take any vote for granted”; Obama campaign spokeswoman Clo Ewing
replied “President Obama does not take a single vote or support from any
community for granted”(ibid.). To prove that Obama does not take any vote for
granted, Travis lastly employs cause and effect. Hilary Shelton, NAACP
Washington Bureau director, states “the president’s policies have greatly benefited
African-Americans, such as health care reform…and protecting voting rights and
civil rigths”(ibid.). With this last quote, Travis shows the things Obama did
through his first term that allow him to take certain votes for granted.
Shannon Travis employs sincere
language. Although Obama was unable to attend the NAACP convention due to a
so-called scheduling conflict, he rectifies the situation by releasing a
statement saying he “really wanted to be with the NAACP because he recognizes
that strong support that he has from this constituency”(Travis). Obama attempts
to make up for his absence by reminding his African-American supporters how
much their support and votes mean to him. Syntactically, Travis utilizes many
quotes and m-dashes in her support of Obama. “I think the policies that he
adopted--for better or for worse--they are very much policies that benefit
African-Americans” says Sabato (ibid.). The quotes from other sources reveal
her adamant support for Obama; in addition, the m-dashes reveal that Travis
accepts the fact Obama is not perfect but that won’t stop him from trying to
fulfill all the promises he has made to the American people, which contributes
to her sympathetic tone.
I agree with Shannon Travis
believing that Obama can risk taking the black vote for granted. Although he
shouldn’t, the overwhelming support from the African American community in the
two thousand eight elections almost ensures him the same amount of support in
the coming election. However, it is not the support Obama needs to worry about
for “[Obama] doesn’t have to worry about losing votes to Mitt Romney. He has to
worry about African-Americans not showing up in the record numbers that showed
up in 2008,”states Sabato (ibid.). Obama needs not to concern himself with whether
or not he will lose his most loyal supporters but more so with whether or not
those supporters will actually show up to the polls.
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